first autumn morning (tan renga)

 

first autumn morning
the mirror I stare into
shows my father’s face.
© Murakami Kijo

hesitantly whispers
Who are you?

©Tournesol’17/05/10

CDHK – first autumn morning

8 responses to “first autumn morning (tan renga)”

  1. janicead Avatar
    janicead

    Nice finish.

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    1. Tournesol Avatar
      Tournesol

      Thanks. Last year with this hokku I used my mom as the reflection…this time I thought of my dad…what a shock! But no one looks like him really. We all have traits from my mom’s side.

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  2. rudraprayaga Avatar
    rudraprayaga

    Nicely continued.

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    1. Tournesol Avatar
      Tournesol

      Thanks:)

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  3. Chèvrefeuille Avatar
    Chèvrefeuille

    Strong continuation Cheryl Lynn

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    1. Tournesol Avatar
      Tournesol

      Thank you, Kristjaan.

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  4. Rosemary Nissen-Wade Avatar
    Rosemary Nissen-Wade

    I get a sense of shock.

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    1. Tournesol Avatar
      Tournesol

      Indeed!

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