raspberry fields (troiku)

CARPE DIEM HAIKU KAI, Chèvrefeuille's Troiku from CarpeDiemHaikuKai, Haiku, Photography, Senryû, Troiku 1 Minute
©Clr’17

(troiku)

children giggling
straw hats in open fields
raspberry smiles

children giggling
one for the basket
and two for me

straw hats in open fields
intent concentration
hovered over bushes

raspberry smiles
a mother’s favourite perfume
sweat mixed with sweetness

©Tournesol’17

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17 thoughts on “raspberry fields (troiku)”

  3. Raspberry smiles! 🙂 🙂 🙂
    I really love the image in:
    ‘straw hats in open fields
    intent concentration
    hovered over bushes’!

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  5. children giggling
    straw hats in open fields
    raspberry smiles

    Luv the opening verse, itintimates sun and shade much like the whereabouts of the raspberry patches

    much love…

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