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Departure #23

A troiku is a new form of haiku created by Chèvrefeuille at Carpe Diem Haiku Kai.

Lazy season (troiku)

call to task
mid-summer harvest
suckling nectar

call to task
butterflies and bees
floating in sweetness

mid-summer harvest
making ready for,
season’s long sleep

suckling nectar
tirelessly collecting
honey’s essentials

©Tournesol’17/08/10

Written for August Retreat at Carpe Diem Haiku Kai – theme is “Departure”

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11 responses to “lazy season (troiku)”

  1. milan rajkumar Avatar

    beautiful lines ! I fell in love with the word – season’s long sleep .

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    1. Tournesol Avatar

      Thank you…it is walking through the thicket behind our offices that inspired this troiku and trying to give you an idea of what I saw along the way I took photos…there were soooo many bees but I only saw one butterfuly. Since the city has dug out some plants and cleaned it up I have never seen my blue butterflies I used to see months after my mother passed. I think it was perhaps a coincidence and it was really my mother keeping me company until I was ready.

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      1. milan rajkumar Avatar

        You are missing the morphos , they live in bushes and thickets , without them they simply vanish . I like your philosophy about the readiness of life !

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      2. Tournesol Avatar

        I don’t think they were morphos…they were tiny butterflies…I saw the same ones for about 18 months after my mom passed and then…pfttt no more 😦

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      3. milan rajkumar Avatar

        maybe they know …. your mother has gone…. !

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      4. Tournesol Avatar

        It gives me comfort believing this.

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      5. milan rajkumar Avatar

        yes …I think so too !

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  2. Chèvrefeuille Avatar

    Awesome Troiku Cheryl. I had missed Troiku in your catching up post of a few days ago, but here it is … a troiku. Thank you for sharing.

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    1. Tournesol Avatar

      Thanks, Kristjaan. Troiku has to come naturally for me. After I write the first and main haiku I wait to see if there are thoughts urging to get out. The 1 to 22 did not give me much time to do that and it would not have done troiku justice.

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  3. kim881 Avatar

    I love those ‘butterflies and bees floating in sweetness’, Cheryl! And I saw a very small blue butterfly yesterday on the salt marshes at Cley!

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    1. Tournesol Avatar

      Oh lovely, I can live vicariously through your seeing it:) Thanks for your lovely comment, Kim.

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