in my garden
starflowers bloom
come and see
© Chiyo-Ni (age 6)
in my garden
a butterfly
lifts my spirit
starflowers bloom
spilling over
like a new poem
come and see
Tournesol
dans un jardin
(c)Tournesol’17-09-20
Poetry ~ Waka
in my garden
starflowers bloom
come and see
© Chiyo-Ni (age 6)
in my garden
a butterfly
lifts my spirit
starflowers bloom
spilling over
like a new poem
come and see
Tournesol
dans un jardin
(c)Tournesol’17-09-20
You are a great Troiku poetess
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Thank you, Kristjaan, I do enjoy it…My experience has been, if my first haiku is inspired with one brief moment, what if I can imagine other moments following the first. It does not always work…it cannot be forced. That’s why I had to write that last verse…it was spontaneously following my previous thought.
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What a joy to read how your imagination works by creating Troiku
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It’s a bit like giving a woman a free pass to shop until she drops 🙂
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☺
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See, I’ve been telling you that you are the Queen of troiku. The master just confirmed it.
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Haha, well, you are all being so darn kind. I find eveyrone did such a fabulous job on this prompt.!!
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