Category: Waka
precious gems (troiku)
kusa no ha [ya] ame ni magirenu aki no tsuyu
blades of grass–
lost among the raindrops
autumn dew
© Issa (1810)(tr. David Lanoue)
blades of grass
snail crawls warily
in the everglades
lost among the raindrops
heartbroken
a lover’s tears
autumn dew
morning frost glints
like GrandPa’s gold tooth
©Tournesol’17/10/27
I have used Issa Kobayashi’s beautiful haiku as an inspiration at Heeding Haiku with Chevrefeuille at MindLoveMiserysMenagerie and decided to use his haiku to form a troiku . A troiku is a new form of haiku created by our host, Chevrefeuile which he explains on his website Chevrefeuillecarpediem.
all saints’day (troiku)
taking their leave
marveling at the clouds
castles in the sky
taking their leave
an autumn ritual
falling into place
marvelling at the clouds
universal convention
gods united
castles in the sky
angels celebrating
all hallows’s Day
©Tournesol’17/10/25
Written for Haiku Horizons’prompt: castle
A troiku is a new form of haiku created by Chevrefeuille at Carpe Diem Haiku Kai
season’s rest (troiku)
sunbeams
orbs floating
through the window
sunbeams
spreading wide
sunflowers
orbs floating
dancing on their path
coming from the light
through the window
Amma’s loving embrace
my soul opens
*******************
sunflowers bow
in reverence
time has come
sunflowers blow
petals dropping one by one
goodbye tears
in reverence
prostrating
amber leaves
time has come
nature’s well deserved
sleep
©Tournesol’17/10/21
A troiku is a new form of haiku created by my mentor, Chevrefeuille at Carpe Diem Haiku Kai.
humility (senyru + cherita)
(senryu)
wrapped
in naked humbleness
confesses her sins
©Tournesol’17/10/12
making the sign of the cross
she leaves the confessional head down,
hands clasped together in prayer
kneeling before the Virgin Mary
giving thanks for absolution of her sins
shivering at her nakedness, she prays
©Tournesol’17/10/12
Inspired by chevrefeuillescarpediem-nakedness
man on the moon (troiku)

sunflowers
smiling at the sky
standing at attention
sunflowers
waving
at the harvest moon
smiling at the sky
praying for a miracle
moonbeams heed
standing at attention
home for Thanksgiving
man on the moon
©Tournesol’17/10/12
How could I not write something about les tournesols (sunflowers)! We are asked to write a poem or story inspired by the above photo at MindLoveMiserysMenagerie’s Photo Challenge 184
A troiku is a new form of haiku created by Chevrefeuille at Carpe Diem Haiku Kai.
*Reference for Thanksgiving is for our Canadian Thanksgiving on October 9th.
Thankful moments (troibun)
wistfully holds
futures passed and gone
scent of promise
wistfully holds
visions of newlyweds
his heart quickens
futures passed and gone
offspring born and grown
love for her transcends
scent of promise
flourishing with each grain
passion begotten
The sky began its concert, with hues that melt his heart. His wife shouts from a distance, “Mon amour nous sommes tous à la table, viens vite, nous t’attendons!”He slowly turns to go and looks with love at his hand, “I love the handful of the earth you are.”
Written for MindLoveMiserysMenagerie – Sunday Writing Prompt 223 – We are inspired by a sonnet by Pablo Neruda and we can take any line or the entire poem to inspire a story. I have chosen to write a Troiku with a narrative which I call a Troibun (taken from Haibun) A Troiku is a new form of haiku created by Chevrefeuille at Carpe Diem Haiku Kai.
Sonnet XVI by Pablo Neruda
I love the handful of the earth you are.
Because of its meadows, vast as a planet,
I have no other star. You are my replica
of the multiplying universe
Your wide eyes, are the only light I know
from extinguished constellations;
your skin throbs like the streak
of a meteor through rain.
Your hips were that much of the moon for me;
your deep mouth and its delights, that much sun;
your heart, fiery with its long red rays,
was that much ardent light, like honey in the shade.
So I pass across your burning form, kissing
you – compact and planetary, my dove, my globe.
searching in the desert (troiku)
The above music our host at Carp Diem Haiku Kai, gave us made me see a Sufi like Rumi, twirling in the desert.
roaming solo
in the desert
searching
roaming solo
listening to the wind
sing
in the desert
a million stars
displaying lyrics
searching
twirls to the son in his heart
he finds himself
©Tournesol’17/10/09
daily moments Thankful musings Oct 8 2017 Troiku

Sunday afternoon
perfect time to give
thanks
Sunday afternoon
praying in His sanctuary
on a park bench
perfect time to give
preparing for a feast
with love
thanks
life, children, family,
friends and so much more
©Tournesol’17/10/08
divine intervention (troibun)
Northern lights will never be the same, she thought, ever since she spoke to that boy years ago. He was giving up on life filled with so much grief saying he wanted to join his ancestors who came every night in shimmering shapes and colours.
tinted shadows
communing with their heirs
every night
tinted shadows
everlasting radiance
from heaven
communing with their heirs
messages of love
embracing life
every night
animated skies return
divine presence
©Tournesol’17/10/04
A troibun is really a haibun with a set of 4 haiku, called a Troiku created by Chevrefeuille http://chevrefeuillescarpediem.blogspot.com/p/troiku-new-form-of-haiku.html


