winter grass (haiga)

(c) Clr '14
(c) Clr ’14

tall and slender
blades braving the wind
snow tramples

timid grass
under a white coverlet
waiting for spring

(c) Tournesol ’14

Carpe Diem Winter Grasses

12 responses to “winter grass (haiga)”

  1. julespaige Avatar
    julespaige

    It is hard to imagine that, though it has been cold, winter has not yet begun.
    Especially with the grass here still green and the false warmth creating blooms for bushes and trees.

    I’ve thought about putting the down cover away for a bit… but then the night gets cold.

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    1. Cheryl-Lynn Avatar
      Cheryl-Lynn

      We no longer can see the grass here but piles of snow is melting with the mild temperatures. The good thing about milder temps, the snow is perfect for a snowman:)

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  2. J Avatar
    J

    Oh, what a beautiful photo!
    Love thinking of the grass sleeping — 🙂

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    1. Cheryl-Lynn Avatar
      Cheryl-Lynn

      Thank you so much!

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  3. Paislee Blu Avatar
    Paislee Blu

    I love “timid grass”–very nice!

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    1. Cheryl-Lynn Avatar
      Cheryl-Lynn

      Thank you!!

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  4. Hamish 'Managua' Gunn Avatar
    Hamish ‘Managua’ Gunn

    The two haiku contrast so well. Very good imagery

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    1. Cheryl-Lynn Avatar
      Cheryl-Lynn

      Thank you, Hamish, I’m so glad you liked them…I think the second described the image best…how that grass is crushed by heavy snow…well, here anyway, it turned to wet heavy snow.

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  5. Mark M. Redfearn Avatar
    Mark M. Redfearn

    Even when trampled by snow, the grasses inspire writers!

    Withered Chrysanthemums

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    1. Cheryl-Lynn Avatar
      Cheryl-Lynn

      (smiles) I think writers are often inspired by doom as much as joy…

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  6. Blake Avatar
    Blake

    I really like the resolute quality of the line “blades braving the wind” – then, of course, the trampling snow arrives… but when it melts the grasses look so much more lush as they spring up 🙂

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    1. Cheryl-Lynn Avatar
      Cheryl-Lynn

      Thank you, Blake, I’m glad you enjoyed this…I do also love the lovely bright rich green come springtime…still far away, we’ve still to greet true winter:)

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